# Comparative Review Audit Use this file when the user wants a Nature-response-like review function before submission, but the review must be grounded in strong related papers rather than general judgment. If the user provides multiple submission files, open `submission-package-audit.md` first and use this file for the comparative review layer inside that package audit. ## Core rule Do not simply say whether the manuscript is good or bad. Compare it against a small set of strongly related papers and identify what is missing, weaker, unclear, or inconsistent. Strong related papers should come from `literature-routing.md` and usually include: - same material or named composite - same material family and same device/application - same mechanism or characterization chain - direct benchmark paper - same target journal or close journal positioning ## Comparison dimensions ### 1. Story and novelty Compare: - how each strong paper states the bottleneck - whether the manuscript states a sharper or weaker gap - whether the claimed novelty is composition, interface, morphology, mechanism, device architecture, application, or integration - whether the manuscript's novelty is visible in title, abstract, introduction, and first Results figure Findings should say: `Compared with [paper DOI/title], this manuscript lacks / weakens / obscures xxx.` ### 2. Evidence and missing experiments Compare whether strong papers include: - synthesis and composition confirmation - morphology and interface evidence - control samples - mechanism diagnostics - statistics and reproducibility - durability, cycling, bending, humidity, temperature, or operational stability - fair benchmark tables under comparable conditions - supplementary controls or methods detail Classify missing items: - `critical`: likely reviewer blocker - `major`: weakens novelty or mechanism - `minor`: improves clarity or completeness - `optional`: useful but not necessary for the target journal Do not claim an experiment was done unless the manuscript provides it. ### 3. Figure audit Check each figure and caption for: - clear conclusion for the whole figure - logical panel order - panel labels present and consistent - axis labels, units, scale bars, legends, and error bars - sample names matching the manuscript - image contrast and cropping problems - repeated or redundant panels - missing controls - caption explains what is shown, not just technique names - figure supports the claim made in the text - resolution, font size, line width, and color consistency risks Use this format: `Figure issue: Fig. xxx | Problem: xxx | Comparison basis: strong papers usually show xxx | Fix: xxx` ### 4. Formatting and journal compliance Check: - title length and style - abstract structure and word count if known - heading hierarchy - figure citation order - reference style consistency if visible - abbreviations defined at first use - SI references and numbering - units formatted consistently - methods detail sufficient for reproduction - data availability, author contributions, competing interests if required If exact target-journal instructions may have changed, verify the current journal page before final advice. ### 5. Spelling and terminology consistency Check mechanically: - spelling errors - inconsistent sample names - inconsistent material names and formulas - inconsistent abbreviation capitalization - hyphenation variants, e.g. `self-powered` vs `self powered` - unit variants, e.g. `mA cm-2`, `mA/cm2`, `mA cm^-2` - plural/singular drift - tense drift between Results and Discussion - inconsistent use of `show`, `demonstrate`, `suggest`, `indicate` Prefer a terminology table: | Term family | Variants found | Recommended form | Locations | |---|---|---|---| ## Output format Return a Markdown report: ```text Comparative basis - Strong papers used: - Target journal: - Manuscript materials/device: Issue tracker | ID | Severity | Area | Location | Comparison basis | Problem | Fix | Author input needed | |---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---| Missing evidence compared with strong papers - ... Figure and caption audit - ... Format and consistency audit - ... Spelling and terminology table | Term family | Variants found | Recommended form | Locations | |---|---|---|---| Priority revision plan 1. ... 2. ... 3. ... ``` ## Word output boundary For the Word manuscript: - Add sentence-level citation suggestions only as DOI-only native comments. - Do not put the full review reasoning inside Word citation comments. - Broader missing-evidence, figure, format, spelling, and terminology findings should go in the Markdown reviewer report.